The advice throughout this piece is amazing. i love how it was put together as a poem, and ended up with so much meaning. you should be proud of this piece, i know I would be.

Aww that really gives you some kind of hope reading that. I loved it, it was beautiful. You have talent. If it comes from the heart it's good - thats what I believe anyway. I'm quite happy one minute, sad the next kind of person so that poem really made me feel happy inside. Keep up the good work :)

Great poem keep it up thats was good at least you like to keep your head in the game and my name is james

Great poem keep it up thats was good at least you like to keep your head in the game and my name is james