Love At First Sight
by Eve Feb 13, 2006
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From the first time my eyes met yours, I knew you were the one for me. The sound of your voice sends shouts of joy through my body. You are the sun that brightens my day. When Iâ??m with you I feel like Iâ??m floating into the heavens. The thought of you holding me close leaves me in heaven. You are gift from god given to me to give me love and happiness. you are the greatest thing that ever happened to me |
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16 years ago
Beautifully expressed, well penned piece. I enjoyed reading it.. 5/5
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18 years ago
by *secrets*
That's a beautiful poem.. you go girl. hey you mite wanna no im only 15 lol
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18 years ago
by Jacob
Love it r we going to hangout this week
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18 years ago
Nicely done, hun.... but my suggestions to make it better would be to put in traditional or closer to traditional poem form. spice it up with some more descriptive words.. and youll have a smashing poem! i gave you a four... youve got potential!! keep up the hard work
amanda and baby
thanks for chekcing out my poem -
18 years ago
by Kaylalala
Wow eve i like ur poems to... very nice
XxKaylaxX
