by Once an Angel Feb 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Understanding, understanding, my lone and desperate plea |
by Kaylee
I reallly liked the style of this poem. I haven't seen it before on this site so far! I did like the message and really I can't think of a thing to improve on it. The only thing is now you've made me want to check out more of yours :) Keep writing. Don't stop. |
Loved this poem I haven't seen a poem like this on here truely original...I gave it a 5 |
by Allison
I love this poem. It had a nice flow to it and I liked that way that you made it rhyme. It had a lovely style to it. Keep up the good work. You have a lot of talent. *5/5* |
by Bridgette
This poem was really good & i understood the message you were trying to teach. i loved it. 5/5 |
by Riffy
This was awesome! I think the message shone through perfectly and it was very meaningful. T |