Oh my god that's amazing. Fantastic write honey, I can relate. XxX

****this is helen by the way, emiles friend, she isn't commenting on her own!!****

Wow you have so much talent!! where do yu get yur inspiration?!

your totally on my favourites now!!

love kate :) x

Interesting poem. Very interesting. Not bad, in fact rhythm was very good.

But you don't have the right to comment on someone's poem just to disrespect them. You have no call what so ever to call her a fool. I mean everyone makes mistakes. I'm sure as hell you're not perfect. So unless people scrutinizing your every (common) mistake don't do it to other people.

You didn't make any mistakes. But it was rude to write that about her and i am her friend. Anyway what do you have against Jess? This is a site for fun, its not like anyone is getting paid or earning anything from here. It shouldn't matter how she does what. Just saying...

Yeah thats what i want to know.....what the hell is your problem i have never done anything to you before and i DONT copy peoples poems im not that DESPERATE and like written in blood said everybody makes mistakes just because i spelled a word wrong it does not give you the right to judge me!!

Yeah thats what i want to know.....what the hell is your problem i have never done anything to you before and i DONT copy peoples poems im not that DESPERATE and like written in blood said everybody makes mistakes just because i spelled a word wrong it does not give you the right to judge me!!