Broken heart

by Amanda   Feb 13, 2006


Broken heart,
torn apart,
Wretched soul,
gaping hole,

Very sore,
feeling raw,
Temper flaring,
people staring,

Wanna quit,
feeling s***,
Stop my pain,
nothin to gain,

Numb feeling,
pain reeling,
Tears drop,
heart stop.

Copyright 2006 - Amanda Linzi

Don't actually know why I wrote this but mixed feelings I think.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    I LOVE ALL YOU POEMS....AND THANK YOU FOR THE COMMENT..AND IF YOU NEED SOMEONE TO TALK TO I'M HERE FR YOU TOO

  • 18 years ago

    by James Nguyen

    This is just great! =)

    --James~

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    That was really good. i have felt like that before. there are so many feelings in this poem. It was really great. nice job.
    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I luv this poem.. its simple n short but has a lot of emotion in it .. good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Touching write sweetie...hope you're doing o.k.

    love ya Bunches, Ann

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