Comments : That Which Becomes Me

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Perfecto, Lissa!! The imagery is simply amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by RyanSmith

    I really liked this poem. It reminds of a scorned lover.
    Bye the way I am glad that you like my work, but I can't tell you how I am able to write the way I do. I just kind of start typing and it kind of comes on its own.

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    I enjoyed this piece immensely. There was something about it that I really enjoyed. Thanks for commenting on what I have written though I believe most not as good as it should be. But yours was well done.
    ~S3I -Faith