Interesting format... I LIKE IT!!!
rhym and repitition. good effect. stand tall and be strong.

eternally, ashes

I liked the flow and structure of this poem
it was cool how every line ended in "again", it made your poem unique

very well done

Like the others said it was good, i really liked the way u repeated "again", u used powerful, strong words....keep up the work ur poem is deffinately unique!! xoxox

Yeh it was a really good idea but it kind of got a bit too repetative after the first five or six lines perhaps either trying a new repeated word or do it in like ternary form ie
....again
....again
....something else
....something else
....again
....again
i hope that made scence but yeah it was brilliently written and your rhythm and rhyme made it an amazing poem good job and keep it up!
aaron

*rhythm and rhyme

I absolutely lo0ved it!!! ur an awesome writer and dont let anyonoe tell u different.... thx for ur ongoing comments. im putting u on my fav list too.....
love lots,
sore

Good! Different, but exciting. Thanks for commenting on mine. I always return the favour. But this is truly gd, no faking.

Luv Niquee
XOXOXOXO

Awesome poem. :) Very original.

You said Loosing twice, but I think you mean Losing. It was really good.
I'm sorry it took me so long to repay the comment you left on one of my poems.
5/5
-Heather

Awesome poem. You just gotta try to overcome that misery again. Great job. 5/5
-vino