I feel this same exact way except my ex bf didnt exactly tell me any lies and he didnt tell me we're thru (he gave me a letter) and Im not strong...possibly kuz he jus broke up wit me.......great poem...

~!Sandra!~

I usually dont like fast poem but so far the two i've read have been fast but i've still liked them immensly!! i loved the message and the feelign behind this poem. it felt like it was just said and then written and jsust happened to flow an rhyme. good job.

I feel the exact same way my ex always lied to me he cheated also
that was months ago and i still dont have a boyfriend because i am afraid it will happen again

loved the poem 5/5

tabby

This sounds like something i'm trying to tell my ex, I loved it and I hope your okey!

Keep up the good work!

-Josiah
Volunteer Worker for FR&C

O my god..im speachless..ur an awesome writer.on the real side though..yea i know wat that feels like..they disquise them selfs so well u never know ur walkin into hell..

Wow!!!! It seem that it a good point for me to understand! I like this poem very much! Thanks for the comment!

Excellent....niice imagry.

LISSA

Wow would I hate to be that person you wrote that to:P haha keep it up and stay strong=)
-sandy-

I really like it. good job. you can really feel the pain

Awesome Job. I loved it for the fact that people can relate. It could of been organized a bit better but overall wonderful job!

~Joe~

Love and hate..so contradictory yet so closely entwined. The phrases placed at juxtaposition like this worked well. Bitter sweet effect. Good length too.

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