by Lauren Waszkiewicz Feb 13, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Upstairs in my room |
by Brittany C
I think that the extra bit should be part of the poem. It would be good with or with out it. I really liked this poem. It is a good piece of work. 5/5 |
by Jackie Marie
Yeah, I think that one part would be a perfect ending. This poem is sad. There is so much emotion and pain that shows when I read this. Keep up the good work hunn. You are a very talented writer. |
by Katie
This is such a powerful poem. I can relate to it. I love it. |
by DeAnna
This is such amazing writing. it sounds exactly like my house. i love the reality in this poem. |
by Megann Lee
I like this poem, it's rather sad and what not but it was well written. |