I know how you feel my dad has had over four wifes and I remember all the fights, the fight with my real mom hurt me the most. I just sat in my room alone thinking the same thing.

I'm so glad I read this poem it made me remember of my sad time with my parents. I hope things will good well for you! Best of luck

-Josiah
Volunteer worker for FR&C

Wow, great poem, i think the last part should defenitly be part of the poem, i can understand how you feel, and i know a lot of other people can too, your poem was really good. 5/5

Great poem, i think i could relate that, my father and mother always fight everyday and evernight, i know how ur feeling and i do understand. just to let u know ur not the only one whose alone

Wow.
i am so sorry you dealt (or still do deal) with this. no child should feel afraid in their own home. but there are people out there who will really love you and care for you.
other than the saddness of this poem, it is amazing.
sorry once again...and if you ever want to talk, i'm here. i haven't dealt with this, but i'm a good listener. sometimes thats all someone needs...someone to listen to them...
5/5
Lauren

I like this poem, it's rather sad and what not but it was well written.

This is such amazing writing. it sounds exactly like my house. i love the reality in this poem.

This is such a powerful poem. I can relate to it. I love it.

Yeah, I think that one part would be a perfect ending. This poem is sad. There is so much emotion and pain that shows when I read this. Keep up the good work hunn. You are a very talented writer.

>black&&blue

I think that the extra bit should be part of the poem. It would be good with or with out it. I really liked this poem. It is a good piece of work. 5/5