This is really good, u r a very good writer

Story put short. i liked it. i gave it a five. i would apreciate it if you looked at some of mine and at least commented a few. i recomend seeing a few my featured. then if you feel im not wasteing ur time u can browse around some more if you like. read swining out of life and into death. ^_^ c ya.

Amazing imagery, and amazing emotions in every line...im sorry that you have to go through this