by Suchapoetictradgedy Feb 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Blood silently falling like tears from a |
by Rocky
A really good dark poem. i loved it |
Wow...i loved this...i can relate to it...i liked how you kept repeating that one stanza... |
by LadyPearl
Great job, in a way, the poem is...haunting. Keep it up |
Good peice, the repition works really well rather than being too strong and ruining the peice (which often happens) you have used it brilliantly the enhance areas and strenghen the overall poem. |
by Mallory
Thanx 4 this 1 steph... |