by ŘÅÇĦ♥ Feb 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Im sorry |
Touching. It's such a sad poem but I like sad poems. They have strong emotion in them. My only suggestions are to again: Check spelling and write out the words (don't use abbreviated forms, ie: ne = any) And capitalize the first letter in each line. Overall: Excellently penned. |