Bill, exquisite. touching. breathtaking. words are no match to describe your poem. if you would read this out loud, everyone would break out in a sweat, turn into a daze, and fall in love with you and your passionate beautiful wonderful writing. i smile and shake your hand vigorously for sharing this delectable poem.

Oh this is wonderful Bill... So passionate and dazzling!

Another breathtaking write! keep up the good work :)

This is so passionate. Breathtaking, really, for I haven't the breath to say a word. Exquisitely wonderful!

Bill....amazing. So passionate, so, so, real. I suppose this is one of very little times that i am speechless......wow what an amazing poem. Please kepp writing, it is truly a gift.
~*tess~
5/5 btw