I Thought You Cared

by TJ   Feb 14, 2006


You'd always love me,
I thought to myself,
you'd always care,
So much for my prediction.

It was Valentine's day 2004,
when i spied you walking through your front door,
With another guy,
His head held to the sky,
when my body started trembling.

I had a rose,
clenched in my hand,
i told you i loved you,
i thought you'd understand.

With anger building in my head,
I watched the distance between you and me spread;
as my head started spinning round and round,
and i felt my body collapse on the ground.

Hatred started building quickly, towards your new found man;
I had to get rid of him swiftly,
I thought i had a plan.

I grabbed a knife,
I cut his throat,
I took his life,
I thought i had hope.

My life was over,
yet so was his,
I cried, you cried,
how could i have done this.

Did you not remember all those happy times?
Please don't forget because i won't.
But this is how you repay me.
Now the executioner has come to slay me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by that ASIAN girl

    This is a nice poem...
    i liked it alot...
    remember...
    i will always love you and care..
    mwah...

  • 18 years ago

    by TJ

    Thanks, glad you liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by The Bad Gorilla

    Fair play on words. Very good imaging.
    Love the way it plays out. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by TJ

    Thanks

    TJ

  • 18 years ago

    by TJ

    Nope i haven't, i'm not really like him i think, (i Hope!!!) I write about what i feel, and i appreciate that you enjoyed/felt this poem.

    TJ