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by Gretchen
HAHAHA good job I liked the flow and the rhyming
by dijah
That was a great poem!
by Atomic
You definitely have a way with rhyming. Though your poems are usually rhyming like so: A A B B C C D D I usually prefer those that rhymes like: A B A B C D C D Maybe you should write one like so, just a suggestion. About the poem itself, I love it. Exacept for the last sentence in the last stanza. "Or was it made for me and you?" I liked how you ended it, but maybe it's the way you worded it with the "Or" that threw me off. ( )_( ) (='.'=) (")-(") Arrivederci!
by Twisted By You
Its sweet and really good