Work in progess kinda deal

by Jeffrey   Feb 14, 2006


A magical trinket found in a mischievous bazaar
the essence of tranquility collected in a jar
the simple sight ignites a consuming control
to barter your mind, body, and soul

the affects are quick and versatile
transportation to a beautifully ill-fated place
allowed to smile and shame is never in style
granted effortless grace and a paralyzed face

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    The simple sight ignites a consuming control
    to barter your mind, body, and soul

    ^^ Jennifer likes that part =ll
    Overall Rating: 4.4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Lvoe he big words.still again no basis of detail..the poem jus is i feel..no offense jeff. Excellent poet but it needs moer color but reason..use detial...again awesome workk.

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Wow. Lovely poem, Jeffrey. 5/5

    XxXN-G-C-SXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Catherine Stephens

    Very descriptive

    gurl from library
    Catherine Stephens(Here is my e-mail
    (kitcat818@yahoo.com)

  • 18 years ago

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