Kuttan, tha was an excellent poem. You really grasped true emotion and feeling when you wrote about what your searching for in life, with great potential. Well done, and keep writing ;D.

Much love and God bless,

FalLEN*-

P.S: "SO I KEEP MOVING FORWARD TRYING NOT TO LOSE WHAT I HAVE.
I HAVE HOPE THE SUN WILL SHINE ON ME ONE DAY."--Beautifully written Kuttan :D.

You are one talented poet Kuttan. The imagery and diction are just flawless. My only recommendation is for you to decapitalise the letters. Nonetheless, an impressive poem. I hope to read more of yours soon.

This is beautiful and heart wrenching.
nicely done. keep up the god work.

hope you are doing ok.

good luck and peace and do take care
shobhana

Hi kuttan.......

Gud composition.......but thoda sa udas kar gayi aapki poem.....

god bless u....

ranju

This was brilliant...5\5...love dia mwaz xoxo

Very deep and the words chosen are so perfect....
It's so good...unforgetabubble hhhahaha i cant describe how i feel about it because it leaves me speechless
love ya
xxAbbyxx

HYe Kid brother

It is very deep poem. Excellent work in this poem.

I want to advice u that you have stuff this poem in capital letter. Butas per guidline rule u can't stuff any poem in capital letters. when they would know they will automatically delecte your this poem. Because the same happen with me. Edit it in small letters
read rules while stuffing any poem