Different points of view

Definitely, you make very good points.
And this is all so true.
And I guess, for me, personally.
Considering all the things that could be
different in my life if i hadn't gone through
all the pain I have, I'd still go back and
change a few things.
Just because of regrets, of unanswered questions,
of things and wonders like about the
-what could've beens- you know.
but I like this poem. great write. 5/5.

That's really cool, it really makes me think about my life. Honestly, I'm the girl with the perfect life, I have good grades, the best family i could EVER wish for, the big house and all the bells and whistles and I never really consider what it's like for those who don't have it as good as me. It sounds mean but you know where I'm coming from? I was always aware that there was people on the streets and everything, but I never thought about what it would be like and stuff. I go to a pretty exclusive school and honestly most of the people are "My daddy's a millionaire, I live in a three story house" kinda snobs. I'm not like that but I think I could be a better person ya know? Anyways, now that I've spilled my whole life story out to you-not quite lol-I should probably get to the point of why I'm here. That was a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

~Amy

Another splendid piecce from you.Its descriptive and well written with overflowing clear and lucid meanings. the rhymes are great plus the flow. I think you have to give one ENTER in the 7th stanza. 5/5 for sure.

would you be as strong
as you are today
would you be able to cope
if you had lived life that way

Catching lines for sure.
Fsams

From bobbi jo---- well, this poem is great and really nothing has happened like this but in some ways it hits the spot... I keep thinking of many things that happen to me, and this poem to me is a 5/5 so great keep writing more.

This is very beautiful, it flowed perfectly, but it is so sad, 5/5 the emotion pulsed so strong in it, well anyway, it was gorgeous. 5/5 again.
luv gabriella