Ha, that is interesting indeed. very interesting. I like you have done a lot of screwy things in my life, and yes cutting is among the many, so your poem hit me as intersting and had a good point, though I can't really say I am proud of who I am today. I am strong, and I can help others with the same pain, but I will never be able to repent fully to everyone that I have messed up so baddly. You have a good point, but I don't have an answer to your question, still . . . it is really a great poem all the same.

-Tainted Mikochan

Wow. very interesting way of looking at things. a very unique peice, and love the message in it. though i cannot really answer your question, i can see your point about how without past events we wouldnt be who we are now, but dont think i really like who i am....

its a brilliant peice very well and clearly written. the concept is amazing and obviosly very well thought though.

5/5

I loved this poem...In fact I thought about this question often and have never been able to answer it myself. It very unique poem and I gave it a 5. However you might want to change in the 4th stanza wake (present tense) to woke (past tense)... You have real talent

Wow. that was amazing. I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work.
xoxo
megan

There we go fing sick as@ poem best one i have read all week maybe longer keep it up or i will kill you anyhow loved it 55/5 boo yah!!!!!!

A while back I commented on this poem, and I didn't have an answer really. Well, not that it matters too much to anyone else but me, but not I do. I wouldn't change it, because I have learned more about myself and others through my experiences. They have shaped me, the are a part of me, and I wouldn't have made a good prom queen anyway, lol. In a lot of ways, if you really think about it, the "perfect life" is definitely over rated, lol. I still love this poem.

-Eleesa

This is very beautiful, it flowed perfectly, but it is so sad, 5/5 the emotion pulsed so strong in it, well anyway, it was gorgeous. 5/5 again.
luv gabriella

From bobbi jo---- well, this poem is great and really nothing has happened like this but in some ways it hits the spot... I keep thinking of many things that happen to me, and this poem to me is a 5/5 so great keep writing more.

Another splendid piecce from you.Its descriptive and well written with overflowing clear and lucid meanings. the rhymes are great plus the flow. I think you have to give one ENTER in the 7th stanza. 5/5 for sure.

would you be as strong
as you are today
would you be able to cope
if you had lived life that way

Catching lines for sure.
Fsams

That's really cool, it really makes me think about my life. Honestly, I'm the girl with the perfect life, I have good grades, the best family i could EVER wish for, the big house and all the bells and whistles and I never really consider what it's like for those who don't have it as good as me. It sounds mean but you know where I'm coming from? I was always aware that there was people on the streets and everything, but I never thought about what it would be like and stuff. I go to a pretty exclusive school and honestly most of the people are "My daddy's a millionaire, I live in a three story house" kinda snobs. I'm not like that but I think I could be a better person ya know? Anyways, now that I've spilled my whole life story out to you-not quite lol-I should probably get to the point of why I'm here. That was a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. 5/5

~Amy

Definitely, you make very good points.
And this is all so true.
And I guess, for me, personally.
Considering all the things that could be
different in my life if i hadn't gone through
all the pain I have, I'd still go back and
change a few things.
Just because of regrets, of unanswered questions,
of things and wonders like about the
-what could've beens- you know.
but I like this poem. great write. 5/5.