When I tried...

by Brittany Paige   Feb 14, 2006


When I tried to get up, you brought me back down.
When I tried to smile you just make me frown!
When I tried to get out you brought me back in.
When I tried to get saved you made me sin!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Zach Armitage

    Your poems are really insightful, you have a unique and perceptive writing style, I’ve enjoyed reading all your poems, you have the potential to be a great writer and are pretty much there. Hope you keep writing, I can’t wait to read your next one. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    Thanx for commenting on my poem and i really like your they are neat!

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