I think that this sounds quite bittersweet, the imagery is awesome I love 'the melting honey sun', and though it sounds optimistic you can still read the sadness underneath. Nice write.

A sad undertone woven throughout. Some really interesting words that depicted the imagery. Loved the ending because...well something about it stood out quite more than anything else. Some nice word play. Clearly your imagery depicted this piece quite well.
~Faith-less