This guy

by Gretchen   Feb 14, 2006


This guy is cute and so much fun
He shines like dew in the morning sun
His eyes, his skin, so deep chocolate brown
For being so great, he deserves a crown
He likes to live and loves to laugh
Oh and by the way, that's not even half

This guy is nice and so sincere
Standing beside him I have no fear
He is always listening and will sometimes smile
Maybe even hold me, once in a while
Softly his fingertips touch my bare skin
All he makes me think of is sin, sin, sin

This guy is sweet and so full of life
More than once, I wished I was his wife
I had thoughts and dreams of us together
Those blew away as if light as a feather
So I moved on, as did he
Took back my heart including the key

This guy is smart and so very bright
Inside his head, on pops a light
Yes it's time, he has figured it out
A smile on his face without any doubt
I look at him and answer "it's true"
"This guy I'm writing about is you"

There has been some confusion about what this poem is about... Its a poem I wrote my ex bf...now best friend for Valentines Day to tell him how great I think he is.

Please comment and rate. The only way I can grow is to know...

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  • 18 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Wow... You convey your emotions very well for not actually saying them. Nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Newbie

    I loved how everything flowed so nicely.. but i realli got confused near the end.. i love your style and the way you didn't only use words by itself.. its lik.. u're making the words yours and then pourring the words out in another way.. its so hard to explain. but.. i love it =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lanie

    This poem is such a cutie I think it's great! ( ^ - 6 )

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    I like this, I mean i really like this, i'm going to write something like this now i just don't know how to start it, i'll figure it out though 100/100 very good job

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Smart poem... filled with love too.. !!
    gave u 5/5
    love
    amy

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