This is great!

Aweeee omgoodness. that is so sweet. great poem! : )

I got confused...is this like a good love poem you guys ended up together or he left you? either way its a wonderful poem

Really good write, I liked the flow. Keep it up. :)

Awesome poem.. i love the rythym and the way it just rolls off your tongue. great job i gave u a 5
~court

IN ONE wORd
**FAbULOUS**
5/5

Wow i love it it is sooo good your an excellent writer!!

love always
tabby

Wonderful, u have ur own style stick to it, u dont need our advice ur quite good anyway. im not sure but what i gpt from this poem from the way u wrote it andthe things that u sed that u like this guy but dont want to ruin ur friendship? please tell me im now very very curious. well take care and good luck. im sure everythiung will be great.love the poem.

Hey i love it you have a good style and your flow was good i really felt you in that one xxALLYxx

Smart poem... filled with love too.. !!
gave u 5/5
love
amy

I like this, I mean i really like this, i'm going to write something like this now i just don't know how to start it, i'll figure it out though 100/100 very good job

This poem is such a cutie I think it's great! ( ^ - 6 )

I loved how everything flowed so nicely.. but i realli got confused near the end.. i love your style and the way you didn't only use words by itself.. its lik.. u're making the words yours and then pourring the words out in another way.. its so hard to explain. but.. i love it =]

Wow... You convey your emotions very well for not actually saying them. Nice job!