This poem feels original, and I liked that. My favorite part was the ending stanza, it was so sweet. I don't know what else to say about this poem, I would describe it sweetly original.

Good job!

Keep writing.

XoXo
Gaby

Aw this is very unique! It is sweet it so seems to come from the heart.
When no ones there = when no one's there

Sorry I'm so fussy! hehe anyway well done and take care!
Polly 5/5