Good one, i didnt really get it til the end, but it was totally worth it. maybe a few more personal points or adding some length to it would make it a bit better...just a suggestion....but it was awesome..im gonna read it again..

Good one, i didnt really get it til the end but it was totally worth it. maybe if there were a few more obvious personal points or making it a bit longer would make it a bit better....jsut a suggestion.....im gonna read it again......