by Nicholas Kerst Feb 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Frayed, crumpled papers drift in darkness, |
by Broken Angel
This is a GREAT POEM!!! I LOVE *ugh... caps was on... scream* this poem!!! This is very well written!!!! Totally love it!!! =) |
by SuperJenius
I also really loved the line "Tears drop..." |
Wow your really talented!!! |
Great job...It's better than some of your more recent pieces. Excellent work. I loved the last lines but overall enjoyed the entire piece. |
by Just Lisa
Hey! Great poem! You're really good at writing, this is a really well written poem! Awesome job! It's a 5/5! Keep writing:0) . . . |