Hey! Great poem! You're really good at writing, this is a really well written poem! Awesome job! It's a 5/5! Keep writing:0) . . .
*Lisa*

Great job...It's better than some of your more recent pieces. Excellent work. I loved the last lines but overall enjoyed the entire piece.
~Faith

Wow your really talented!!!
that was a great poem keep up the good work.. you have a way with words
xnikki

I also really loved the line "Tears drop..."
you have a really great gift i fairly enjoyed this poem

This is a GREAT POEM!!! I LOVE *ugh... caps was on... scream* this poem!!! This is very well written!!!! Totally love it!!! =)
5/5 keep it up!!! ;)