by Ashley Van Eperen Feb 15, 2006
category :
Special events /
valentines day
I'm sorry that I'm writing you but I just can't forget. |
by Jessica
Wow.. very nice poem! i really enjoyed reading that.. it had a nice flow and it was very romantic.. it really kept me reading! nice write! 5/5 |
by Bridgette
Aww.. that is really sad. You did a great job on this. And I could definitely relate to it. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and it's filled with emotions of sadness and love. Great job! |
by Sondos
I like this and think its written in an interesting way -the way the format is slightly different in each line represents scattered thoughts etc. and i like that very much. Nice words and well strung togethor |
by Megann Lee
Ohmy..SadSad.. T_T |
by Natalie
This was amazing! I really liked it. The last stanza was awesome aswell. Really brought it all together. Keep up the awesome work. Im lovin' it! 5/5 |