by Emma
I loved it. writen well that was amazing. great job. |
by SweetSuicide
Wow i really can relate to this one..made me tear up a bit cuz its so real to me..But if you can get that kinda emotion forma poem its got to be a truely amazing one that it is..5/5 |
by Emma
This is amazing....i love it 5/5 |
by Kaylee
This was my favorite poem of yours. And that's saying something because normally I rather write anything that has to do with love then read about it. But you avoided the typical cliches'. (Sorry if I can't spell that) Overall, I think you should just go over your poems and just nitpick somethings and see if that adds more of the effect you wanted. |
by Loulou
Wow i loved this one i agree with my1&only this is my fav poem of yours too! |
by Jessica
Wow.. very well written! the flow and rhyming of it were very good.. keep it up! 5/5 |
by Brigitte
Awe that was adorable! SO sad/beautiful/ and cute! A great mix of emotions all in one poem! I loved the format you chose to display this poem and the rhyming was very unique! |
Loved it, it was written very well!! you r very talented for being 16!!! i added u to my favs!! Great job!! |
by Natalie
This was amazing! I really liked it. The last stanza was awesome aswell. Really brought it all together. Keep up the awesome work. Im lovin' it! 5/5 |
by Megann Lee
Ohmy..SadSad.. T_T |
by Sondos
I like this and think its written in an interesting way -the way the format is slightly different in each line represents scattered thoughts etc. and i like that very much. Nice words and well strung togethor |
by Bridgette
Aww.. that is really sad. You did a great job on this. And I could definitely relate to it. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and it's filled with emotions of sadness and love. Great job! |
by Jessica
Wow.. very nice poem! i really enjoyed reading that.. it had a nice flow and it was very romantic.. it really kept me reading! nice write! 5/5 |