Great work

take care x0x0

Great work keep it up.. *~*Take care*~*

I really liked the repititions in this one, also it had a nice flow. Deep, it really gets the emotions across. 5/5

Liked this one 2 :) keep it up

Wow, this poem is amazing. It's filled with so much love. It almost brought tears to my eyes, but I loved it. Keep up the amazing writing. 5/5