Valentine's Day

by silhouette fairy   Feb 15, 2006


They sit together
on the lover's holiday
cuddling, and smiling
acting lovey dovey
he knows she wants to die sometimes
she thinks there might be someone else
they part in their ways
he goes to the one he loves
she to the one that loves her
she holds the cold metal, his photo
crying why couldn't you love me
like the way you love her
she holds the blade closer
thinking "walk the sidewalk"
she gets closer to her want
he now feels her pain
leaving his lover
he runs down the road
now she is thinking "no turning back"
the blade "walks the sidewalk"
now turning, it "crosses the street"
he reaches her house
tears running down their eyes
she clutches the note
he clutches the nob
just a second too late
she lays there motionless
kneeling beside her
he reads the note
"we both can't get what we want"
he knows, though no one else does.
he now belongs to her
she got her wish
but he shall not
that was her happy ending
but his sorrowful beginning

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  • 18 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    Very good... it makes me sad.. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Very good! very sad and very emotional.. excellent write! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very well wriitten, though it seems to get a little confused in the middle it quisckly recovers. overall a fantastic peice

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Really sad....Its good though.

  • 18 years ago

    by an endless sky

    I like this very good