You defantly have a talant for dark poetry. this is a brilliant peice very clear and great imegry.

5/5

Wonderful n brilliant i liked the way u chose ur words

Significance is a bribe,
Money is the trigger,
Rape is to pull,
Child, Lucifer shall snigger,

Grace of silhouette dancers,
Truth has been slanted,
As the skin begins to break,
Child your wishes won't be granted,

you, my dear, are brilliant.

Emma, you have so much talent, im in amazment. this poem is fasinating in its abstract ness (if thats a word). heres a quote i know to inspire you

"your potensial shines so brightly it blinds me"

Love Ruby

Again quite good. well done Emma