All end up the same

I read a inspirational poem about how we're all the same and this is a definate contrast *that's the word, right?*

I think you could have gone more in depth but the word choice was decent as well as the organization and flow.

So much truths behind these lines. Something I can relate to. Short yet powerful. Anyway, wanna say a thank you for your comments on my poems. Greatly appreciated. =)

Lovely poem
great selection of words
5/5
love
amy

It a super poem. short and yet very powerful and brings across a very powerfull and clear message. however i must say i dont think that you r reali someing up in a fair way, sure life seems like that sometimes, well most of the time really but the thing is it does have its good points too. i mean atm as far as im concerened i feel so much like your super poem but i no there is gd in life i mean my earliest poems can tell ppl that. anyway i loved the poem and i can reali relate to it but i guess what im trying to say is that if i can carry on figting and smiling so can u so smile and fight it and never gove up, ever. well em enough with the pep talk.lol. take care and good luck. a defenite 5 btw.

I liked it, it kinda shows a message to everyone who reads it. Great job!