by Always4You Feb 15, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I sat in the bathroom crying today. |
by Tara Kay
Umm, this poem was good, i liked it, not the best you've wrtten but still good. |
by La La
I did the same with a boy. well actually, with every boy i ever been with! i like this poem =)) |
Great poem i love your expression through and your last line sayin believe it cause its true..excellent job |
Good poem... although the one stanza confused me, the whole poem you were saying how you wish he'd go but then in the next line you say how you wish you could make him stay, try saying rather something like: I really wanted you to stay, |