by Booogerz.♥ Feb 15, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
~In this poem Lisa wrote the first stanza, I wrote the second, then her, then me...so on and so forth. =) |
Heh, I definitely have to check out more of your twos poems. The way you write is so interesting. I think it's the first time I've seen an actually poem written like this. It kind of reminds me of when me and my friends would take turns writing lines ^_^. |
by Rachelle
I liked because I felt like I could picture the poem in real life, it was like you were describing a story in a poem, but you words were so descriptive I could visually see what you were trying to say |
by N J Thornton
I really liked this write. The only thing I wasn't keen on was the rhyme scheme, or the lack of it. Some lines rhymes abab others aabb and some not at all, that inhibited the flow considerably. |