Immortal Sin

by Anthony   Feb 15, 2006


You said you'd never leave,
You said you'd always be my friend.
You promised you would be there
Forever till the end.

All three of us had tempers,
And I chose to take a walk.
I lost it once again,
And now we don't even talk.

I can't stand to be alone
With the darkness closing in.
Who is there to stop me
From this cold, immortal sin?

Quietly, I'm ready.
And I bold and lock the door.
Silently with many tears
Red rivers hit the floor.

Sliding down the wall
I lack the energy to scream.
Maybe when I wake up,
This will all have been a dream...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    It's nice, there were some cliche parts, but I liked it anyways.

    Some part doesn't flow naturally, I think you can fix it.

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