Comments : Dark Mother (Haiku)

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Wondeful write!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ohhh very nice poem. A lot of different elements in 3 lines :D

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Good one Kim! a child of the night is a beautiful way to describe it.

    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    Wow haunting and mystifying. beautifully written, XXXXX
    JL

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Harding

    I really like this, it's a nice little image :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Ah, the wind. She is indeed a child of the night...haunting even the oldest and wisest of us.

    Pretty poem with nice, suttle imagery.

    good job!