This is fantastic i love it and didnt have trouble staying interested in the poem even though it was longer, a fantastic job :D
xx ALLY xx

I liked the movie Titanic and you did well with trying to write out what was happening. Maybe you could, and it's just a suggestion, but write how Rose might have been feeling as they were floating in the water and she was basically watching Jack die.

Aww. Your right. I did like it. Very well written. Made me sad :( Your an excellent writer. Wish i was that good. Keep it up.
Xx Chrissie

P.S I was really happy to help you out :)