This poem is amazing great job hun!!! it was so powerful especially the last stanza too... that was brilliant is left me saying awww at the end!!!

great write hun
keep it up
Hayley-Ree xxx
check out mine sometime xxxx

The fathers hold their daughters
Whenever they have the chance
But tonight this girl's an Orphan
At the daddy-daughter dance.

That gave me the coldest chills...Way to go..Best poem yet.