Wow.
its good.ur technique is good.

Hey, this is a reallllly good poem.. it gave me the shivers. i know how it feels.. one thing one i think on one line it should say breath not breathe? hmm maybe not. but anyway..
amazing poem x

Damn it, the last verse really moved me, you're such a good poet and i hope you feel better xxxx lobby xxxx

I like....says wat i wanna say but can't put into words...