Beautiful sad poem you penned here, simply but well express emotions.... hope everything well with you, take care...and thanks for your nice comment on my stuff, much appreciated.....bert ~

A brilliant piece of work that serves as a breath of fresh air from the over-cliche, blotchy, 'teenage poetry' that is so often clogging the world of beautiful writing. excellent piece, a solid 5/5. i wouldn't change a thing.