Wow... thats cute

Very cute i would also have to say. It reminds me of the song Stand By Me actually how you repeat the friend part. i swear i dunno why but that reminded me of that song when i was reading this lol. But yeah i had to listen to lol. but anyway you did an amazing job once again. for putting only 2 poems up so far your are very creative and talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Good Job on this one i like the format much better...i also love how this poem flows almost like a song...keep up the good work..Joc

Awww dis was sweet....awsum work...love dia mwaz xoxo