Wow so sweet poem written here

I like this one too it reminds me of a few poems ive written about dreams.....Another Great Poem...Joc

Hey sarah i relly liked this poem,,,n thnx 4 de comment u gave me on mine

I like this poem, you took something that is used a lot in poems (Dreams) but not usually written so well. Great job, I really enjoyed reading this poem.

It's great.

I like the poem alot. It's like a fairy tale, and fairy tales are great. 5/5!

I sense some pretty deep emotions in this one. 5/5

I liked it. it reminds of times when I'd dream about the girl and then I waking up and knowing she really isn't around. good stuff. :)

S reminds me of my poem called "fairytale love" I think its really cute and sweet. The emotion seemed some what strong throughout this. and i love the use of fairytales. Well done ~mel

Haha, this is very cute. Short, to the point, and sweet. Nice writing, Sarah. The first line, first stanza, you say 'night' and I think you mean to say 'knight.' Maybe you are intentionally using a play on words, I'm not sure. Keep writing! Congrats on 1st place in the club contest.

5/5

Aw, thats a cute modern-ish fairytale. Its flowed so nicely. I like the mix of fairy tale and modern-ness. Great Job!

Aw. very sweet. thanks. reminds me of my bf...

A nice poem here good job