As sad as that poem is, Juan, Its probably one of the best ones you have written on here, at least in my opinion. Its a really really Good one.

This is not a sucky poem. It's such an emotional piece, that seems to have so much pain within each word. You express yourself very well. Keep it up. Nik

This is really good!! Liked how you described all your feelings very well.... I saw an old me in this poem....

Simply yet beautiful. One of your most amazing and honest pieces of poetry.

Aww so sad but well written. 5/5, Em

This is really great!
It has amazing flow, and i love it!

keep writing cause im putting you in my favorites!
cant wait to see what comes next!

-jess,.

Btw: If you wouldnt mind commenting some of my poems, it would be greatly appriciated!

Raw simple emotions find ways to express themselves no matter how hard we may try and hide them. Bravo bro