Forever

by UnderAge Dying   Feb 16, 2006


** I Wrote This In 7th Grade, It Kinda Goes Off Track But It Is One Of My Favorites And Means A lot, Comments And Votes GREATLY appreciated!! **

Every Day
You Would Say
It Will All Be Okay
But You Didn't Give A Crap
If It Happened Anything Like That

All Your Lies
And Your Bloodshot Eyes
They Didn't Stand A Chance
All The Couldn'ts and Can'ts
With Those Broken Promises

You've Hurt Us Enough
Now We Are Tough
Against Bastards Like You
What Could We Have Done?

You Deserted, You Lied
You Cheated, We Cried
And I Can't Take This Anymore
So I'm Letting Go
Forever.

*I Would Love
To Stop This Pain
And Heal Our Souls
To Mend These Hearts
That Were Torn Apart So
Many Years Ago

But You Keep On Pulling
And Tearing These Tatters
To Shreds
All The Pain,
All The Sorrow,
The Dishonesty
It's Over Now Because*

You Deserted, You Lied
You Cheated, We Cried
And I Can't Take This Anymore
So I'm Letting Go
FOREVER.

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  • 17 years ago

    by kimberly

    Wow! really deep! have a great night.

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletTears

    You write so beautifully. Even if this is from 7th grade, it's still awesome.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittnee

    When you were in seventh grade, that is outstanding. I hope i'm not making a mistake, but I'm thinking that is to your dad, and if I'm wrong...I'M SO SORRY. but from reading most of your poems, i get it the feeling that your parent(s) aren't the best people in the world. *lol*. well great job anyway.

    ~Brit