THE SUNSET

by Goth marionette   Feb 16, 2006


It's the soundless moment,
When the rain covers all the roads.
like a distant desert has a lonely pale rose.
When everything turns into just a fake.
When life acts as a deadly mistake.
While the autumn is the only guest,
The frivolity is going to be the preacher and it seems the best.
Some guilty foot in the room,
It is coming out like the headlong horse with no rein in the gloom.
There is something so far calling the virtue, calling the sin.
The man feels the angels pulling his soul from his shin.
People are there around the soul.
They are watching it as if it seemed a star's fall.
Ooh, it is peaceful but it ain't a lie.
Emotions receive and can't ever reply.
The light drops in the sea,
Clouds are foggy and no one can see,
and no bird can even fly.
The sky has no sheen as it is about to die.
It is the only sad song and also has only one tone.
This is its certain time but it seems as if it had never shown.
Everyone has gone and he had never known,
that from his head till his toes,
just one heart, mind and One fate which he cannot ever choose.

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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    This was a very powerful poem and so sad it was too. the image in this poem got stuck in my mind. the pain was out of this poem. very word just blew my mind. it was amazing n unique. well for it was. I love it. Keep up the awesome poems.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Love your work keep it up and dont let no one stop you of writing wonderful poems (^_^) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Heba

    Goth, this poem is incredibley amazing. When I read some of your poems so far, I felt that I have the same thoughts that you have and I really think in some ways just like you.
    well done friend, mashallah.

  • 16 years ago

    by adroit

    Great poem. Well writ. Great imagery at the beginning. It really sets the mood for the rest of the poem. Its awesome. Honest Luck

    Sarah

  • 16 years ago

    by Amnah

    Thanks Goth for your comments. Your poem's great. Liked it.