Comments : Fading (Rictameter)

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    ^^^what else is there to say? he said it all. Truly beautiful write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Wonderfully write. intresting poetry style as well, i'll have to try it! i love the poem

    ~Jacklyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely penned, good job!!! For a first attemp, excellent.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully done!

    So, how did the divorce party go?

  • 18 years ago

    by Jimmy Jr.

    That was excellent every one of them i loved them all thankz for letting me read them i apreciate it alot you made me feel happy by reading these thankz

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    WEell I see the eyes of jealousy all over this poem, a 4.2? I happen to love your work and who would know better than some of my esteemed colleagues up above here. Fantastic write!! Kepp them coming. Love, Tim

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Beautifully worded Holly and a pleasure to read, really enjoyed your poem :o)

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wonderfully written; you've done a great job within the confines of this form! it is a pleasure to read your work!

    good luck and peace
    shobhana