by Bill Turner Feb 16, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
A shadow passes before the sun |
by Yella
You write so beautifully... your words have so much meaning... it hit me so deeply... I loved it... your a great writer... 5/5 |
by passion
This is a really good poem....i really like it check out my poems sometime if you have a chance... |
I gave it a 4.3. i would apreciate it if you would give me a comment or 2. but its up to you i don't want to waste your time. c ya. |
First one of yours i've read i think.. really impressive, i love the moral feel you have in your writing. Trust and forgiveness are (like everyone else has reminded you.. lol) essential parts of any relationship, closest to everyones hearts, you've portrayed this so emotionally and excellent. Well written dude :) |
by Simon Hayes
Another superb poem! Forgiveness is an important component in love (Of any kind), but so hard to obtain and give! A wonderfully written piece Bill :) |