Powerful and clearly written, very strong feelings very well expressed. nothing really there to fault.

5/5

Wow... This was so amazing! You are very right from the start. The only thing I can possibly suggest to you is to try and space your lines out. It gets confusing just reading one big paragraph. But other than that your poem was great! I am extremly impressed and you can count on it that I will be reading more! Keep it up.

sammie

An extremely powerful write. Never give up hope ... for love is out there just waiting to be found. I enjoyed your other poems too, you clearly expose your emotions. Nice job.

TRUELY BEAUTIFUL

This is so true

Like many other have said "It's so true" and truely beautiful, thats beacuse it really is!

Keep up the good work and I hope that you find true love someday!!

Good luck

-Josiah
Volunteer worker for FR&C

^_^ THANK YOU. Err, yes, I love it. And the stands you take. And the way you describe love. It's all very good. This is a well rounded peice I must say.

*favorites you*